Talk: Lorenzo Cabot

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Irrelevant information

I think there is a case to be made for deleting or rewording/condensing the last two paragraphs of 'Background' (from "Jack Cabot has devoted his life to studying the artifact..." onwards) as it is not directly relevant to Lorenzo. I haven't done so, lest it be considered vandalism. --L84tea ^{Would you like a cup of tea?} 10:13, 23 January 2021 (UTC)

I read it and agree with you. It needs at minimum a trim, or could be merged to other applicable articles. I trust your judgment in making the edits, certainly not vandalism in any way, shape, or form! --kdarrow ^{take her for a spin!} 10:44, 23 January 2021 (UTC)

People have been hella touchy in the past when they see things deleted. Anyways, tis all tidied up (at least to my liking) now. Feel free to add things back in but I think I kept everything that was relevant. --L84tea ^{Would you like a cup of tea?} 20:56, 23 January 2021 (UTC)

Ah yes, you would know better than I, and as expected, it looks completely fine to me. That information is already included on several other appropriate articles and this one reads much better now. Solid work! --kdarrow ^{take her for a spin!} 21:17, 23 January 2021 (UTC)